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    <updated>2009-11-24T07:17:15.960+01:00</updated>
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        <id>http://www.cocomment.com/sidebar?object=people&amp;context=explore&amp;mode=detail&amp;id=mpomerantz&amp;conv=2482738&amp;comment_id=78047503</id>
        <title>Wow!  This visual metaphor sou</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>Wow!  This visual metaphor sounds powerful.  Do you know how to make that happen?  I don't :-), but if you can do it, more power to you!  Do you know a bunch of kids who will serve as actors?  Remember that you are going to film this sequence, so it's not just theoretical.  Is there one that could be nearly as effective, but not so complicated to create?</content>
        <published>2009-04-15T14:17:08.321+02:00</published>
        <updated>2009-04-15T14:17:08.321+02:00</updated>
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        <title>Let's limit the comments to ac</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>Let's limit the comments to academic discourse, OK?  You don't need to approve messages that don't pertain to the topics.  We need to reign in your buddy, huh?  :-)</content>
        <published>2009-03-11T23:28:42.715+01:00</published>
        <updated>2009-03-11T23:28:42.715+01:00</updated>
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        <title>Here's another article--hot of</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>Here's another article--hot off the press.  It may help you convince your classmates:-)

http://www.google.com/hostednews/afp/article/ALeqM5gpul1tW5QMnVcipPqj9k0FsKWSSw</content>
        <published>2009-03-11T19:54:13.952+01:00</published>
        <updated>2009-03-11T19:54:13.952+01:00</updated>
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        <title>Amanda--
These are great quest</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>Amanda--
These are great questions about the production process.  We are going to answer all of these questions as part of our day to day activities in class.  You could design my lessons ;-).  

What I intended for you to do for class was to focus on five questions that would help us narrow our topic.  For example, how much do we throw away that &lt;i&gt;could&amp;lt;/&amp;gt; be recycled?

If you get a chance, please add some new questions before class and answer how these questions will help us make our film.</content>
        <published>2009-03-04T04:55:03.429+01:00</published>
        <updated>2009-03-04T04:55:03.429+01:00</updated>
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        <title>It sounds like you are passion</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>It sounds like you are passionate about environmental issues.  Think of ways to persuade your classmates--appeals to ethos, pathos and logos :-)

Please remember to double check your work before you post--go back in and edit this draft for standard capitalization (English and I).</content>
        <published>2009-02-21T16:40:16.479+01:00</published>
        <updated>2009-02-21T16:40:16.479+01:00</updated>
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        <title>I use Jing! to make quick 1-3 </title>
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            <name>Anonymous</name>
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        <content>I use Jing! to make quick 1-3 minute screencasts for my students for things that I'm pretty sure that I will have to reteach 100 times or so.  

Sometimes, especially with tech stuff, they don't know they don't understand until they know they don't understand--and it's always one at a time.  So instead of reteaching the same thing over and over, I can let the screencast do my work for me--and I sound as fresh and enthusiastic as I did the first time I taught it.  The screencast never runs out of patience :-)

I, too, was frustrated that I couldn't easily embed--I'll try the workaround next time.  

If anyone wants to see some screencasts, there are some on my  &lt;a href="http://nhsglobalwarmingdocumentary.edublogs.org"&gt;blog&lt;/a&gt;under category "screencasts."</content>
        <published>2008-05-25T06:39:12.295+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-25T06:39:12.295+02:00</updated>
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        <title>Sounds like even though you we</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>Sounds like even though you were frustrated at times, you did learn something--yea!

I appreciate your insight about how difficult it is to talk to strangers and to work in a group.  Sometimes a camera is a good way to put a little distance between us and the strangers and embolden us to reach out and find out what others are thinking.

Glad you found some resources.

I think you demonstrated great leadership during this project.

It was a pleasure having you in class.  Have a great summer.</content>
        <published>2008-05-23T04:22:27.947+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-23T04:22:27.947+02:00</updated>
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        <title>Thank you so much for your ide</title>
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            <name>MLP</name>
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        <content>Thank you so much for your ideas.  I will work on it next week after I give my finals.</content>
        <published>2008-05-15T22:11:55.575+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-15T22:11:55.575+02:00</updated>
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        <title>I have recruited adults "blog </title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>I have recruited adults "blog readers" from the school and beyond.  The students do not know their blog mentors and they are excited when someone besides me and my student teacher write back.  

Some of the recruited adults have poked around to other blogs and have commented on them as well.  They have also given the link to friends, colleagues, and spouses who have jumped in every once in awhile.

I would like a more organic readership, but this was a start.  

I have encouraged the students to put clustrmaps on their blogs so that they can see if others are visiting (even if they are not commenting).

You could also pair up with another class (in town, out of town, across the world) and get an organized type of feedback.

Good luck!</content>
        <published>2008-05-15T17:50:14.786+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-15T17:50:14.786+02:00</updated>
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        <title>Andrew--

I sense frustration.</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>Andrew--

I sense frustration.

I'm also sensing that this frustration/anger is aimed at me, your loving teacher.  No problem, I can handle it.

To address several issues:
1) "because you can’t possibly check all the work at once"
If you notice, I've been  "checking  your work" all along--I've been commenting and urging  you to revise your posts, do more research, finish the submissions you were to have posted.  I then gave one last warning  to update you blogs and get all posts published before  I put a grade to them.

Seeing that we started this project March 25 and  have been blogging since April 4, it  seems that summarizing and responding  to 11  pieces of information is  a reasonable amount of  work.  

2)"Also you have to think what’s important to teach them when making the video and what to cut out, teaching the class how to work a program for a whole period is very boring and unnecessary especially if you personally don’t know how"

I did put thought into what is important to teach and what "could be cut out" but if you have specific suggestions for feedback, then I would be happy to hear them.

While it is true that some students know a lot about technology, many students do not.  It is my job to teach them.

I'm not sure what program you are talking about that  I don't know how to use, but if it is Adobe Premiere Elements, I think you may be misinformed.  While I don't claim to be an expert, I have played around with it enough to be able to make my own little movies and create screencasts  for our class so that I don't have to take a lot of class time to re–teach the basics.  

3)"being weighted so hard on my grade" 

We should discuss all grade matters on an individual basis.

4)"filming can be last seeing that the school is too poor to buy even those cheap things from Wal-Mart; why waste money on tapes and fire-wires when digital is more efficient."

Yes, I, too,  would  rather have digital cameras, but to have a class set,  this is what I could  get a grant for.  That grant was also the only reason you could  check out that camera to enter the contest.

This rant  does not seem appropriate  for the class blog. I'm not sure how it is  furthering academic discourse.  

I will be pleased to have specific feedback on  how to  improve  the project.

&lt;b&gt;Please edit to take out inappropriate language&lt;/b&gt;  This is a class project.

I'm glad  you learned how to  internally link  you posts--it's helpful to your reader.  

Yes, I read the post and ignored the tone.  Perhaps I shouldn't have.</content>
        <published>2008-05-13T01:01:11.485+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-13T01:01:11.485+02:00</updated>
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        <title>The &amp;quot;F&amp;quot; design reall</title>
        <author>
            <name>MLP</name>
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        <content>The &amp;quot;F&amp;quot; design really helped me think about how readers look at blogs.  Thank you for your informative analysis.  I teach high school English and my students all have their own blogs--I would like to help them create a clean design that is easy to read.If anyone wishes to critique our &lt;a href="http://nhsglobalwarmingdocumentary.edublogs.org/"&gt;blogs&lt;/a&gt;, we would be happy to get feedback.</content>
        <published>2008-05-12T23:23:51.365+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-12T23:23:51.365+02:00</updated>
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        <title>Britt--

The idea behind the p</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa Lynn Pomerantz</name>
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        <content>Britt--

The idea behind the purpose  and audience of a blog is one I wrestle with briefly--and then move on because I feel impelled to write or I will forget what I was thinking.

My blog  has multiple purposes and audiences, but I have just left it under one umbrella for my own sanity.

1) I write for my students to show them  models of how to blog, how to summarize and respond to  research, and  post  screencasts  for "how to's"--mostly technical stuff.

2) I write for my students' parents  to explain my rationale and keep them informed.

3) I write for my colleagues (known and unknown) who might be  interested in adapting the project.

4) But it seems mostly I write for myself to get down the  teaching reflections that  sometimes find their way to a post-it note (and sometimes not).  I'm trying  to be deliberate in my reflections.

5) And the added bonus is when someone I don't know does read my blog and adds insight that  I would never have had if I had just written  in my journal. 

So while I don't expect to become a world famous writer, it's  nice to know there is the possibility of a wider  readership than just me.</content>
        <published>2008-05-10T15:22:07.107+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-10T15:22:07.107+02:00</updated>
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        <title>just wondering if this woll wo</title>
        <author>
            <name>Melissa</name>
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        <content>just wondering if this woll work.  there are some things that I am trying</content>
        <published>2008-05-04T01:49:59.570+02:00</published>
        <updated>2008-05-04T01:49:59.570+02:00</updated>
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